Tuesday, 3 February 2009

The love of small things - part 2 (Tuesday)

So... I said I'd post a short poem every day this week. Here's one I wrote earlier this week...on Monday to be precise. Because I like to be precise and concise. Sometimes.



The poem that can change everything

Look
There it is
It's just over...


RF 2009

x


p.s. Over at Sunny Dunny there are some other short things you might like. If you're at work beware though - some might make you laugh very loudly.

8 comments:

khaye said...

concise and simple, just as you wanted. love it!

Rachel Fox said...

Hello and welcome Khaye.
Nice to meet a new person first thing in our morning.
x

Dave King said...

Yes, that'll do for me. Concise... not sure about precise, but does enough.

Rachel Fox said...

No Dave, you're quite right...the precise was more to do with when I wrote it than its content...which is very hazy, as you can see.
x

SUSAN SONNEN said...

Where? Where? (desperately she scans the landscape...)

Rachel Fox said...

I believe the appropriate song might be U2's 'I still haven't found what I'm looking for' (although I prefer the Chimes version).
We keep looking...we can see it...but can we catch it?
x

SUSAN SONNEN said...

and i loved your shiny stone yesterday~

Rachel Fox said...

It really was whispering...
x